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My Writing's too structured,
This I know to be true,
Laced with cliched rhymes,
I need to know what these words can do.
See what I mean?
I need to experiment with prose
and not constantly plan where every word goes.
This is going to harder than I thought
I need some uneven lines,
Time without a scheme,
Upsidedown words without any clout
Man, this stuff is hard to figure-
Out with the rhythm
Out with the counts
Out with the structure
Out! Out! Out!
Ok, that sounded a lot like Dr. Seuss.
Let me try once more:
Words are flying around and, with a drunken pen in hand, who knows what I'll write. Lines swimming through the air, all trying to make it into this pen's drunken rampage. Helping my thoughts straighten up, only to end up skewed in ink transfer. (Three cheers to the poets who've mastered prose - their pens must be inebriated whenever they write). This feeling, it's new, of flying, fleeting freedom. With this pen's last drink the
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